start writing

Today I started writing the first draft!

Paraphrasing is tough!! I think I need time to get used to it.

Writing Intro and Extended Outline

Now I am having hard time to manage my schedule with other class presentations and essay dues....

so,
I am doing step-by-step working, as Ken told us in the class.

working on Formal Outline

I have found more than 25 information(and other informal comments about the movie) now.

and,
I decided two body paragraph topics
(cultural issue and the movie making problems).

preparing for a formal outline

now I have watched "The Cove"
and in some extent have getten basic knowledge of whaling in Japan

the next thing I am supposed to do is

make a formal outline
collect more than 40 sources

so I am now reading some books and articles on web
and also collecting some comments about the movie from ordinary people