start writing

Today I started writing the first draft!

Paraphrasing is tough!! I think I need time to get used to it.

Writing Intro and Extended Outline

Now I am having hard time to manage my schedule with other class presentations and essay dues....

so,
I am doing step-by-step working, as Ken told us in the class.

working on Formal Outline

I have found more than 25 information(and other informal comments about the movie) now.

and,
I decided two body paragraph topics
(cultural issue and the movie making problems).

preparing for a formal outline

now I have watched "The Cove"
and in some extent have getten basic knowledge of whaling in Japan

the next thing I am supposed to do is

make a formal outline
collect more than 40 sources

so I am now reading some books and articles on web
and also collecting some comments about the movie from ordinary people

topic and my plan

I changed my topic to
"whaling"

Actually now I am worring that
may be this topic sounds very ordinary in theme writing.

I am planning of :
focusing on the documentary? movie "The Cove"
and
focusing on the cultural points in this the whaling argument (not the political points),

which I hope can make my essay interesting.


Now I am in the process of finding sources.
HOWEVER
I cannot find where/ how to see the movie "The Cove".
If you have any information, please let me know!

Topic and Finding Sources

Now I am thinking of writing about

Background Music

it is also called "elevator music" in English

"furniture music"
a word which was coined by a famouse composer Eric Satie
also has a simillar meaning.


now I am looking for sources

however, there is less books which focuses only on BGM
so I think it will be a hard work to integrate the sources.

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